In the year of 986.Egypt was a hard land less resources and less chance of succes.There were 4 Pharaohs who were eager for each others land.At last one of them declared war with each other and the war began to spread.Now it's up to you to decide who will win.It's my first map ever.I hope you like it
so what do you guys think do i have future in map making :D ?
The Zgullhad
Posted on 07/17/10 @ 04:22 AM
im downloading it right now lets see ^^
The Zgullhad
Posted on 07/17/10 @ 07:30 AM
Rating
3.7
Breakdown
Playability
4.5
Balance
3.5
Creativity
4.0
Map Design
3.5
Story/Instructions
3.0
Hooka hey
First welcome and thanks for sharing maps.
Playability: 4.5
+no bugs/glitches
+enough space for ai and multiplayer fun
-bridges become fast zergplace and end out as a static warfare
~hHere fords would fit very well. Take the third largest of the white stones to do so. Then make a path through the trickle of nil. You could add large and small stones to make it look more natural.
Balance: 3.5
+ressurces aviable for everyone
-swamp isnt all eqally but isnt that bad
-Space should be better balanced
~add some more space to noth east land and southwest.
~make the land northwest little smaller
Creativity: 3.5
+A Rare desert map, plays good with desert mod!
+Good job in mapping egypt
-Here too: missisng somthing special.
Map Design: 3.5
+use of textures
-some textures could be more frayed
~ smallest pencil.
-needletrees in egypt?no go.
~use more bushes less threes make it look more subtropical an hotter.
-Too less sandtextures
~use the plan sandtool around the keeps
to make it look busy.
+like the little isle in he west
On the edges of the river, you should add grass to the shore. In the middle of the green or blue coloring tool to give it a healthy Color. (If the Nile is in flood, it can be a real mud flow.) But as the river is calm here, he has a deep blue color.
Story/Instructions: 3
Nice little story yet nothing thrilling,
~u should give some more information about the map the circumstanses especially cuz its a historical map
Additional Comments:
Really cool map fun to play enjoed it keep up the work .i hope i can review more of your work and see your improvment.
Greetz from the reviewteam
[Edited on 07/19/10 @ 11:05 AM]
aqualord123
Posted on 07/18/10 @ 03:44 PM
yeah, you probably got a future in map making, mainly becuase you know how to come up with original shapes and such in your maps, ( I deeply value people who konw how to do that, im bad with coming up with the layout, I even quit a map becuase it was so detailed, but was so detailed that i couldnt even make room for my estates, so a skill like yours is somethhing Id value, :)...).
Ungear File Author
Posted on 07/18/10 @ 07:35 PM
Thanks for the nice comments. I just did a map about the Balkan continent. It's waiting upload i did some improveing like lord The Zgullhad mentioned.I hope you like it to xP.
aqualord123
Posted on 07/19/10 @ 01:41 PM
Id suggest using elevation more in your next maps, but NEVER use elevation to the extreme, while elevation expresses much variation and beauty, it can act in negatively influencal ways if it is abused in the form of how much space it takes up. In your case you might not of used much elevation and not too much estates to take up room in the barren areas of the map. I understand this is a dessert map though but maybe you could have some dunes and shrubs.
Ungear File Author
Posted on 07/20/10 @ 02:48 AM
What do you think of my new map it's just been added in New Files
aqualord123
Posted on 07/21/10 @ 07:46 PM
oh
didnt see your new map yet, ill go check it out
aqualord123
Posted on 07/21/10 @ 09:23 PM
i saw your next map, see my comment on your new map page